Longing
This video is very near and dear to my heart. It was a difficult video to edit but it was something that helped me to move forward with my life.
Your white balance and color choice are a great depiction for your mood and emotion. I thought the tilt shots were very well executed and added a nice change of angle. Very well done.
This is obviously very personal for you and the emotion really comes through. The story is clear and the music helps support it. Here are some things that could improve it. When you are looking at the book I would like to see you stop on a page a few times, Cut to a new angle with a CU shot of the page followed by a CU of you looking at the page. Your exposure and white balance were good throughout. Your movement was pretty smooth but it looked like you either had auto-focus or auto exposure on so as you move the lens buzzes a little bit as it deals with the change in the frame. Turning your camera to manual mode would get rid of that, even if you just did it for those shots.
This was a very beautiful video. I liked the smooth pans and the writing of the note!
ReplyDeleteThe music really fits this video. Good job!
ReplyDeleteAs you flipped through the pages of that book, I felt that you were looking back, remembering, or longing for someone inside of it.
ReplyDeleteThe narrative created strongly conveyed the appropriate emotion. Nice work!
ReplyDeleteYour white balance and color choice are a great depiction for your mood and emotion. I thought the tilt shots were very well executed and added a nice change of angle. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteI liked the the music and the emotion in the video.
ReplyDeleteThe panning of the shots were well executed and the only part i was upset about was not getting to see more of the quote that the subject was writing.
ReplyDeleteThe ending really got me. Maybe the only change would be a little variation in shots.
ReplyDeleteThis is obviously very personal for you and the emotion really comes through. The story is clear and the music helps support it. Here are some things that could improve it. When you are looking at the book I would like to see you stop on a page a few times, Cut to a new angle with a CU shot of the page followed by a CU of you looking at the page. Your exposure and white balance were good throughout. Your movement was pretty smooth but it looked like you either had auto-focus or auto exposure on so as you move the lens buzzes a little bit as it deals with the change in the frame. Turning your camera to manual mode would get rid of that, even if you just did it for those shots.
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