I like the music choices, and the point which you changed the music. You did a good job giving us the 'rushed' feeling at the beginning of the video. I couldn't tell very well what the boss said which confused me a little.
I really liked this, but I think the ending scene was a bit too abrupt. Maybe it would have helped if the music eased into it, or if she waited to be excited until after she came in the door grumpy?
I liked how you made the whole first half of the video seem frantic and she was trying to get ready and go to work. I think we can all relate to how frustrating it can be when we pour a bowl of cereal and THERE'S NO MILK! So I love that you included that as well as well as the bloopers. Good job!
Your story was clear, and I thought you accomplished your pitch pretty well. The actor at the end was unfortunately distracting because he didn't seem like he was getting into his role very well.
This was a pretty enjoyable video and it got the point across and was executed well.
ReplyDeleteCute video. I loved that you put bloopers at the end. Sound design could've been better.
ReplyDeleteReally cute story! you did a good job of making it believable and not over-complicating things. I also love that you included the bloopers at the end!
ReplyDeleteIt was a really cute video, you did a good job of telling the story, I understood what was happening. Loved the bloopers at the end!
ReplyDeleteI like the music choices, and the point which you changed the music. You did a good job giving us the 'rushed' feeling at the beginning of the video. I couldn't tell very well what the boss said which confused me a little.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this, but I think the ending scene was a bit too abrupt. Maybe it would have helped if the music eased into it, or if she waited to be excited until after she came in the door grumpy?
ReplyDeleteI think you all did a great job! Very nice camera angles, good lighting, nicely edited, and funny story!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the story, and you had good lighting. I also liked the editing, it was done very nicely. Good job group
ReplyDeleteI liked how you made the whole first half of the video seem frantic and she was trying to get ready and go to work. I think we can all relate to how frustrating it can be when we pour a bowl of cereal and THERE'S NO MILK! So I love that you included that as well as well as the bloopers. Good job!
ReplyDeleteYour story was clear, and I thought you accomplished your pitch pretty well. The actor at the end was unfortunately distracting because he didn't seem like he was getting into his role very well.
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